00:00
00:00
Lokstar447

17 Audio Reviews w/ Response

All 29 Reviews

Keep playing with this sound. If you continue it you will have something great to show

trixelbit responds:

Thank you very much, am starting to experiment with this sound so hopefully I start making some new music.

Pretty good overall. I personally think you should remove some tracks from it. It almost has too much for me to get an honest feel of the song. It got a lot better towards the end of the piece. That might be the sound you're going for though, I'm not sure.

RazorSoldier responds:

Thanks a lot, you're not the only one who think I should remove some tracks.

It's good! You really build up your sound well. I understand it's trance but if you throw in a hard synth lead towards the end it would work nicely. A big ending might give it an edge.

supervoltage responds:

Hmm... Your idea is nice, indeed. I wanted to make a piece which simply calms the heart and soul of everyone - a zen piece, to be a little funny :p

I might use your idea here on a future project, though. That is, if I don't forget.

It's not bad but it's way too short. I understand it's a work in progress but it's really not much of a submission at this point.

DetiousMusic responds:

Okay. I upload a short version so I can test it through my sub because It's in my car, so I put it on newgrounds. As I said for the guy below me, review the song not the layout of the song. Learn how to review.

Seriously well done. It flows really well and every track added and removed really builds up the sound. There wasn't any point where I thought it was too much.

johnfn responds:

Thank you!

It has a nice build to it and I like the backing tracks. If you put more work into it you could have something. Swap out the leads and play around with it some more.

kopacetic responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

Good Song

Overall a pretty goos song. Is your mess up like 24 ish seconds in? it sounds different...

neoblent2 responds:

nope. the mess up is in fact at :52 i fucked up the role there. haha. nice try though. and thanks for the support!

sounds sick

I like the way it sounds. Also there is more than just guitar, bass, and drumms which I think is really cool. Also your voice completely fits your music. I would describe it as close to viking metal but still different, in a good way. P.S. Piano/keyboard is sick.

neoblent2 responds:

Yea, we get that alot. the genre is folk metal. Look into it. it's great music.

Runescape?

It fits the part but it sounds out of date (like runescape music)

DragonACE responds:

Never played ruinscape, so didn't steel it or anything. Thanks for the review!

Cliche

The drum beat seams cliche and it could have been longer but for a first attempt it wasn't all that bad. I would make soem parts glitchier and intense.

jkrox4eva responds:

Thanks lokstar, the drum beat was sampled but i'll make sure to create a more unique beat next time to hopefully get a better score from you :P.

As I learn about it more I'll definately make it more intense.

Starting to put up music

Age 31, Male

Student

USA

Joined on 5/17/08

Level:
7
Exp Points:
525 / 550
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
4.97 votes
Rank:
Civilian
Global Rank:
> 100,000
Blams:
2
Saves:
13
B/P Bonus:
0%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
20